Tuesday, February 25, 2014

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2 comments:

  1. Good interplay, or implied interplay. Starting to get a better sense of character building here beyond grumpy, and a secondary character with more depth than simple reaction.

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  2. Thanks Mike! I appreciate your thoughts. More secondary-character interplay's on the way.

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