Friday, May 8, 2015

Page 165

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  1. Just read it from beginning to here. Awesome work!!!

  2. Still loving this comic. Hope you'll forgive me for this though:

  3. Forgive you?! It's one of the coolest things I've ever seen! I don't think I've ever been fan-fictioned before.

    Anybody interested in an ending to "The Last Mechanical Monster" that's very different from mine (and, frankly, I couldn't even write) is encouraged to check that link. Neat alternative history, I enjoyed it! Thanks.

    1. *second try*

      Thank you! I know you can't show the Big Blue Boy Scout for copyright reasons, so I figured it might be a little easier as a text story.

    2. Love it. I'm reading the comments over there but didn't want to poke my nose in and interfere. I like your thoughts on Lillian's motives. There's no Superman in my story for both copyright and storytelling reasons: I figure everyone in my world already knows what happened to Superman so they don't sit around discussing it. Maybe he's around, maybe he isn't. On an entirely different topic, I will point out that one of Sparky's mourners on Page 164 included a tall strapping fellow wearing glasses....

  4. I was pointed here by Jeriendhal, after reading his fic.

    Both this, and that fic, made me tear up a little. It's brilliant.

    Yes, copyright and such do interfere, although I've seen people do wonders with silhouettes, shadows, and off-panel commentary. In any event, this is a brilliant bit of work and I'm going to point other people to it.